My first mystery series, The Outsiders, has three published books, while my other two series have only one published book each. I have another book planned out for each of those series, and they’re all tugging at me to write them. I know the characters extremely well, and even without a full outline, I can anticipate much of what will need to happen in those books to get the characters from Point A to Point Z.
That’s not so with the book I’m currently writing, The Handyman. It’s the first book in a new mystery series. The book is set in a troglodyte village in France, similar to the village in my Outsiders series, but the characters are new. I’ve done a lot of background work–I know a great deal about each character. But a writer (at least most of us who don’t create full outlines beforehand) can’t really know what it will take to get those characters from Point A to Point Z until we begin moving them through our story world. We need to see them react to the setting, see them interacting with each other, before we can truly know how they will react to various situations. Understanding human nature and psychology help, but many of us really need to explore the story with the characters in action before we can completely understand the specific characters we’ve chosen.
I’m now a quarter of the way done with the first draft of The Handyman, and it’s going great. That doesn’t mean I know everything that will happen, but that’s okay. If I’m engrossed in the story and can’t wait to find out what will happen next, it keeps me eager to write.
Getting back to what I was saying about exploring with our characters, sometimes we find that we have to get rid of one character and replace him or her with someone else. Sometimes we find that we need to add another character who will contrast with or relate to a particular character. Other times we find that the story we originally thought to write isn’t the story we’ll write after all. In getting to know our characters, we may discover a more important story. That’s the fun of creating a work of fiction.
Even if we’re working with characters we’ve already used in previous books, we might have to make changes. While I was working on Winter Tears, the third book in The Outsiders series, I thought Elena Pearson would be the protagonist and the story would be focused mostly on the disappearance of one of her children. As I wrote, I quickly realized I’d gotten it wrong. The story I really wanted to tell was more about the joy and fear that parents face. Although Elena is certainly a main character, the gendarme captain who is investigating the child’s disappearance is really the protagonist. He’s about to become a father for the first time, his wife has been in an accident, and his life is full of turmoil and fear.
So, if you’re working on a book and are worried because you don’t have everything planned out in advance, keep writing. You may uncover a great story. If not, don’t delete it. Make changes to your cast or your setting. Think about what you really want to create. Let your imagination engage.
10 Comments
Jane Risdon said:
July 27, 2015 at 3:24 pm
So true, well said. Good luck with The Handyman. 🙂
Susan Finlay said:
July 27, 2015 at 3:30 pm
Thanks, Jane! Yesterday, I wrote a couple of pages in the book but realized something was missing. While I was trying to go to sleep last night, I thought about the book. Then it came to me. I needed to extend an earlier scene and have the main character find something that brings up a major question/mystery. I wrote that this morning, then read the part I’d written yesterday (that followed the extended scene). It worked. Now I’m happy with it.
Jane Risdon said:
July 27, 2015 at 3:35 pm
I often fine my brain sorts things out for me when I am asleep…things I never realised I had a problem with. An amazing organ! Amazing what flits through your mind as you drop off. Glad it worked and you are happy. Another hit on the way 🙂
Richard Sutton said:
July 27, 2015 at 3:49 pm
Thanks, Susan. I needed that. It’s hard sometimes, to find a way to keep encouraging yourself when the road seems to have been detoured for a while, but you reminded me of how the characters revealed the story to me once I began pounding the keys again on book three. I can’t imagine why I can’t seem to retain it, but a nudge is exactly what the doctor ordered.
Susan Finlay said:
July 27, 2015 at 3:54 pm
That’s great, Richard.
gail Korbel said:
July 27, 2015 at 9:28 pm
Thank you. In the process of retirement from teaching FOREVER English as a Second Language High School level, here in El Paso,TX. Have begun a book, a little autobiographical. Creative juices are flowing, voice concept is established, but story sequence – not so sure. Thank you for this valuable email share.
Susan Finlay said:
July 27, 2015 at 9:35 pm
You’re welcome, Gail. Good luck with the book. I’d be interested in reading it.
jeanette taylor ford said:
July 27, 2015 at 9:46 pm
I love this! My writing mentor has always said I should use a storyboard (what’s one of them?) and I should know exactly what is going to happen in each chapter before I write it. I can’t seem to do that. You have made me happy, Susan, because now I know that the way I write, finding out as I go along what the story is going to reveal, is not wrong after all. I enjoy the way I write. Each to his own methods, I say. xx
Susan Finlay said:
July 27, 2015 at 10:07 pm
I’m glad my article helped, Jeanette. I know authors who write the same way I do and others who write full outlines. Both ways are fine. We each need to find what works for us. Good luck with your book.
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July 31, 2015 at 2:15 pm
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